xD It's adorable, Phiyrr, really adorable! (: A very nice piece. -can't wait to see hers-

This is a really good drawing, I really like it a lot, it is nice. I really like the color. I looks like a really nice drawing.

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Aww, thanks ^-^ It looks very cute, your style is a lot more on the realistic side than I expected Not that it's a bad thing at all, it's just rarely seen, and I don't think Tobias was drawn in a realistic style too often either It's sure pretty in any case, and it's in real media too! ^-^ There are just a few minor things I'd suggest on Phiyrr's anatomy - I like how you drew her in respect to the anatomy canines have - her belly looks a little flat still (is in, it's pretty much a straight line), but at least dogs tend to get slimmer towards their hind legs - nooo idea whether it's the case on foxes as well, but I would think so ^^ It's just a minor thing though, and her back looks just about right, so it's really just her belly that might be a little off, that's all ^-^ Her legs are fine too, her hind legs don't really look as if she really has too much weight of them, since the toes point downwards - but if she is standing on them, they would probably face in the direction she's looking, you know what I mean? Like, if you're standing, your toes wouldn't point downwards either, uuunless you're doing ballet It's no biggie either though, and on her forepaws it's just perfect actually, because it shows how carefully she checks whether the water is warm enough for her, barely touching it. The overall shape of her legs you did well on too, maybe the part where it has that zig-zag shape could be just a but smaller (with the upper part of the leg being a little longer to make up for it), but all in all she's well drawn - and she sure looks just like a fox too, being rather long and everything, and her pose with how she stands and holds her tail looks all natural as well ^-^ The scarf looks pretty on her, and gives a nice contrast to the orange too, her googles loook a little tinted, probably something you'd only wear in warmer places and not exactly on the south pole, no? X3
And Tobias looks just adorable - you drew him very well, and he looks very seal-like too Hehe, he has a dark-brown marking around his eye now? X3 It looks fitting though, and adds to the cuteness you drew him in too
From the technical point of view, changing the gamma level of the picture generally helps with pencil drawings - the colours become bolder and easier to see that way, but all in all it's a cute drawing and an adorable gift too - thank you very much for it You've sure come a long way too, keep up the good work ^-^



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Yay, you finished it, I'm like going crazy because of it.

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